Morte's Retreat

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Morte's Retreat

The cracking of ice caused Morte to shiver with fear for as the ice broke and spring began Morte's life was steadily drawing to an end along with Morte's riegn. The rush of the freshly melted snow could be heard charging down the rapids of the rivers all around as their ice covered tops melted and flowed free down to the creeks and streams of the land bringing life where ever it went. The thaw of the land was almost complete and Morte's life was hanging on threads; or more correctly icesicles.

Buried thus in the snow Morte would be able to keep what strength it had left untill it was time for Morte to come out of hiding . So as outside down in the valley of life the birds sang their songs of life and happieness Morte with the patiance of any good predator waitied. For in two seasons Morte would riegn agian.. Till then Morte would gain what power he could from inside its hole on the top of the mountian from the deaths of those animals in the valley too weak to live. To someday riegn agian.

For as spring began and brought life to the land it drained Morte of srength and Morte soon was loosing all the control it had once held over the land.. The plants were starting to blown and as bady animals were being born Morte was dying. So fearing that life would truely concur this time arround Morte gathered its strength and weakly dissappeared up into the mountians. Morte climbed for days untill atlast he was at the top of the highest mountian ,on its highist peek, in it's coldest area. There Morte set to work making itself a cavern deep in the snow and collasping it in on itself.

Please tell me your opinions of this short paraphs bad story. I wrote it earlier this weak and I don't really know if it is good or not.

Note: Don't point out my grammer and spelling mistakes please. Comment though.Please rate me too.

The Questioning

-A.L.B

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aprildunothing added this comment 2011-01-14 08:30:26-06:00

Does this story make sense to you? i don't know if anyone but me gets what I am talking about in this story. What do you think I am talking about? Note: I will be responding to your comments here so please come back and check what I had to say. I will not be mean if I get bad reviews. I'm just practicing my writing here for you see i would kinda like to be a writer but i have a strict of thinking I suck at writing. But if that is true please tell me.

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