jeffchan
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2009-07-02 01:35:50-05:00
I think you should read the book more carefully. Bella obviously doesnt leave her mom because she "needs some room". She is prepared to spend some quality time with Charlie as Renee missed Phil.
As well as that, the description of Bella is inaccurate. Bella is clumsy, not "not sporty"
bilobong205
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2009-06-02 22:26:32-05:00
Its really good especially the TRAILER its amazing. Also the background its so cool
caroline303
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2009-06-02 22:08:53-05:00
This is really good and it really makes me want to read it (again). I like how you've put the end bits in capital letters as it makes it stand out. You might also want to make the writing in the text boxes smaller as it's quite hard to scroll down so much. Overall it's amazing. :)
rosette24
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2009-06-02 22:05:37-05:00
VERY GOOD especially the layout!! i love the speech bubble hehe :)n i agree with sophie!
jeffchan added this comment 2009-07-02 01:35:50-05:00
I think you should read the book more carefully. Bella obviously doesnt leave her mom because she "needs some room". She is prepared to spend some quality time with Charlie as Renee missed Phil. As well as that, the description of Bella is inaccurate. Bella is clumsy, not "not sporty"
bilobong205 added this comment 2009-06-02 22:26:32-05:00
Thx you :) Sarah :)
stephaniecorrianna added this comment 2009-06-02 22:11:34-05:00
Its really good especially the TRAILER its amazing. Also the background its so cool
caroline303 added this comment 2009-06-02 22:08:53-05:00
This is really good and it really makes me want to read it (again). I like how you've put the end bits in capital letters as it makes it stand out. You might also want to make the writing in the text boxes smaller as it's quite hard to scroll down so much. Overall it's amazing. :)
rosette24 added this comment 2009-06-02 22:05:37-05:00
VERY GOOD especially the layout!! i love the speech bubble hehe :)n i agree with sophie!
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