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I ran, just kept on running through the brisky air of the night. The moon shined down on my rust smelling shoulder. I held my hand at my shoulder. running trying not to scream. I didnt want anyone to find out, it was too embarassing. He trailed the back of me with a slight angry tone as he yelled my name. MAKINZI, DONT RUN, Was all i could hear. My heart pumped fastly as i started to run out of air. Someone HELP, My brain was screaming, but i guess no one heard. I could hear water ahead, knowing i couldnt see i would just run strait toward it. He still was yelling, and i could feel his breath on my neck. I kept running toward the water, but the water was running too. It was running away from death, it was running away from all the bad things in life. I took i giant plunge. I felt like i was flying. My shoulder hurt no more, no yelling screams from behind, and no dark woods. A giant chill spread through my body though. I opened my frightened eyes and saw a blue world. The world was calm and peaceful shielding me from him and his ruffness. Tiny little visitors fleeded away from me. I standed up touching the ground which was mushy. Green plants covered the bottom. I picked up a little daisy that was floating above me. Light shined from above. DO YOU NEED HELP OUT OF THE RIVER? A small voice came from above. I relized that i wasnt breathing air but it was water and i opened my mouth. I couldnt breath anymore. This blue world was trying to take me away. The voice above pulled me up laying me in their boat. Is she alright, Help her bloody shoulder, Lets check to see who she is. The voices kept repeating the same questions as i looked up at them Wait, she is waking up. One of the voices stopped the others from freaking out. WHERE AM I, WHO ARE YOU!?! WHAT HAPPENED!?! WHERE IS HE!!?! I yelled shaking from total distress. Three young women stood over me. Your okay, We saved you from this horrible tided river, He...well who is he? One started to explain and i started to calm. He is my father....I sighed laying my head back down. My chest hurt from being without air for a long time. Oh, we must get you back to him. The older one smiled. NO PLEASE DONT! I yelled trying to sit up and escape. Hun dont escape, please tell us why? The older lady held me up. Because he is abusive...My arm was hurt by him, So many bruises. I cried. The elder lady hugged me and patted my back, Its going to be okay, your safe now. I stared into the river and saw my moms beautiful face show up, Mom, we will catch him, For your sake, Its became my hunt, I want justice for you and me....
dedicated to Makinzi's story (1997-2009) Makinzi your my best friend...no one will never hear the real story that i heard. I will get you justice, I promise.
dede1sfriend added this comment 2010-02-20 00:24:53-06:00
:...( omg caitlin im like pouring tearsouti cant help it.....im so very sorry for what happened to your friend i cant even begin to imagine what your going through
dede1sfriend added this comment 2010-02-20 00:24:53-06:00
:...( omg caitlin im like pouring tearsouti cant help it.....im so very sorry for what happened to your friend i cant even begin to imagine what your going through