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The door slams her eyes shut her skin turns cold she shivers in fear her heart pounding deep in her chest the darkness surrounds her know where to turn know where to run room empty laughing in the distance scared she bolts to the door trying to open it nothing she runs to the next still nothing she runs to another it opens running through only to find more doors she turns around franticly looking for a way out looking for the right door the laughter grows she begins to panic even more sweat slowly drops from her forehead not bothering to whip it away she runs to the door she thinks will open it does only to find a dark closet with dead rats slamming the door shut she presses her body to it making sure it won’t open she runs to another door it opens to another room lit by a single lamp a chair sits in the middle of the room the light flickering she looks around dried blood on walls her thought tightens her hands make fists heart racing in her chest the chair had leather bands on the arms and the feet of it she knew what it was she had to get of the room she turned to run out the door slammed in her face the laughing only grew closer and louder she closed her eyes when she opened them there he was waiting for her smiling at her his eye glowing red her fear grew her breath shortened she had nowhere to go what was she going to do she was trapped she backed up to the door slowly reaching up for the handle to the door it was unlocked she turned it slowly he looked at her still smiling he did even blink his eyes locked on hers he was about to say something to her she spit in his face swung open the door and ran through slamming it behind her his fists pounding at the door yelling at her she grabbed her shoes and wedged them in to the door so he couldn’t get it open she looked around the room panicked there was no way out she was done for then she saw a light it was the sunlight joy swept over her then he pounded the door harder and harder she ran to the window and there was the outside right at her finger tips she tried to open it up it was glued shut she pulled at it panicking she saw a rock and grabbed it she threw it into the window glass flew everywhere the air hit her face like smell of sweet honey she hit it again and again finally she was able to fit through the door flew open the smile gone his eyes burning red now she froze his face even scarier then before he ran at her yelling she jumped through the window he caught her foot the glass dug into her skin she was bleeding all over her scream surprised her he was pulling her back in she was hanging on to the window seal with one hand she looked down and realized she still had the rock in her hand she threw at him as hard as she could he stumbled back ward holding his face screaming in pain she got her leg free and jumped to the ground she looked around she could hear him still screaming in pain then she turned to look into the house and that’s when she saw them 5 little faces beaten and scared looking at her with pleading eyes she ran to the window it was glued down as well she told them to move away from the window she us3ed all her strength and punched the window as hard as she could it shattered in her hands blood spilling from her hands and arms she didn’t care she told them to follow her it will be ok one by one they crawled out as fast as they could so young she thought so helpless the man still screaming in pain with slight whimpers the children frightened clung to her arms scared to death she could hear the sound of cars driving by she took them and they ran as long and as far as they could caring two of the youngest ones and having the stronger ones help the weaker they ran for what seemed hours even though it was only minuets they reached the road and as she looked back she saw him running at them all scared she saw their chance to run to the other side grabbing another little child they ran as fast as they could the other side cars were coming they saw them and swerved one hitting the man but when she looked back he was running the other way they had gotten away she thought they were all safe now. . .
gothgirl added this comment 2011-09-04 03:09:24-05:00
wow this is brilliant!...she thought?? does that mean there is another part?
chalkdawg added this comment 2011-09-03 23:31:23-05:00
Good writing here! 5 woofs.
gothgirl added this comment 2011-09-04 03:09:24-05:00
wow this is brilliant!...she thought?? does that mean there is another part?
chalkdawg added this comment 2011-09-03 23:31:23-05:00
Good writing here! 5 woofs.