Snakes at the airport By Sophie McAllister

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A Holiday with the Aussie snakes!

Sophie, (me) mum, dad and Christiaan are waiting at Brisbane airport in Australia playing games like hangman, dead lions and Simon Says and some other games waiting for our taxi. Then suddenly a bunch of snake slither into the airport and start doing funny dances like the chicken dance the macarenda and some other crazy dances to! We sit there paralyzed like a blue ring octopus has just touched us with it's tentacles. I was scared out of my skin! After a long frightening period of time our taxi driver arrives he calmly walks inand get brainwashed by the snakes and starts doing a funny dance aswell! By now you can imagine we are terrified until... I thought as quickly as a computer on broadband I went up to the snake leader and whispered in his ear. ''Boo!'' The snake was quite startled by this so he hissed to his friends something that we could not understand. After he had finished they danced out of the buildingan the taxi driver slithered over to us and asked my dad ''You order a taxi sir?''

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classgb added this comment 2008-11-17 01:54:49-06:00

i really like it sophie it makes you want to read on!!!

classgb added this comment 2008-11-26 01:30:27-06:00

Sophie, some great description in this Narrative. You have foloowed the structure well, i especially like out ending. It provides changes the mood of the story dramatically, which gives it good effect. A great effort. Mr Booth

classgb added this comment 2008-11-20 16:22:00-06:00

I really like your narrative sophie it made me want to read on.I think you may like to edit just a bit more. But overall a really cool narrative. Holly

classgb added this comment 2008-11-20 16:12:38-06:00

good narrative sophie but in some places i got confuesd

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