angelictwo
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2009-11-13 01:27:42-06:00
everybody feels alone, but it is more catching when you find different words to describe it.
it was just a friendly sugestion though, my advice is just an offering, not forced.
corrupted
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2009-11-12 12:38:31-06:00
well if you knew my life you would be using that world alot too
angelictwo
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2009-11-12 00:00:12-06:00
I think you use the word alone too much, a thesaurus would be a good tool for you at this point, they help a lot. Good peice though, other than your addiction to the one word.
xoxsaraxox
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2010-02-12 07:53:03-06:00
Its so sad but so well written...u do know how to express urself! Smetimes me too i've zis feeling...a feeling zat evry1 around me dnt really care n zat they just pretend! N it hurts alot but life wasn't meant to b easy....
Great glog...1 :)
corrupted
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2009-11-17 02:22:41-06:00
oh i know.. i dnt try to write they jus come out in whatever way they do...lol
angelictwo added this comment 2009-11-13 01:27:42-06:00
everybody feels alone, but it is more catching when you find different words to describe it. it was just a friendly sugestion though, my advice is just an offering, not forced.
corrupted added this comment 2009-11-12 12:38:31-06:00
well if you knew my life you would be using that world alot too
angelictwo added this comment 2009-11-12 00:00:12-06:00
I think you use the word alone too much, a thesaurus would be a good tool for you at this point, they help a lot. Good peice though, other than your addiction to the one word.
xoxsaraxox added this comment 2010-02-12 07:53:03-06:00
Its so sad but so well written...u do know how to express urself! Smetimes me too i've zis feeling...a feeling zat evry1 around me dnt really care n zat they just pretend! N it hurts alot but life wasn't meant to b easy.... Great glog...1 :)
corrupted added this comment 2009-11-17 02:22:41-06:00
oh i know.. i dnt try to write they jus come out in whatever way they do...lol
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