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goryu added this comment  2011-08-01 09:21:59-05:00

I will admit the i imagery and the feeling of the story is fairly seem to be going for a mystery with an ensuing plot...your trying to grab the readers attention with words of hesitation...your also trying to portray the feelings of each characvter as if it was your own eyes... it's really great I really like it :)

kay66 added this comment  2011-08-01 00:40:27-05:00

-rELEY Good story (:

coldblooddarkangel added this comment  2011-08-01 00:31:19-05:00

Great job! Can't wait to read the rest of the story!! :)

ayoliv added this comment  2011-07-31 23:12:31-05:00

gee man every time itry to write my ideas down they become to detailed! u have the gift of writing i need to put my dream into a movie!

cathyla added this comment  2011-07-31 21:39:56-05:00

very AWESOME;)

mythological23 added this comment  2011-07-31 20:57:44-05:00

well writen love it!

mona2010 added this comment  2011-07-31 15:17:29-05:00

well written sad story

ashleya9988 added this comment  2011-07-31 15:11:42-05:00

Oh, Breathtaking. I Love it.♥

starrfire555 added this comment  2011-07-31 00:14:34-05:00

OMG!!! I LOVE IT!!!! awesome job! please tell me if you write more!!!

lovethemountans added this comment  2011-07-30 23:47:54-05:00

wow nice love it

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