then heard a very faint knock on the door... she slowly approaches the door and hears the sliding glass door in the back open slowly and heard a bang so she ran for cover she had ran upstairs and hid under her bed it turns out that they were two guys and they start roaming around the house searching for her she covers her mouth restraining herself from screaming in terror. She tries not to move and sneezes she hears the guys running up the stairs right after sneezing she feels a hand on her leg and he pulls she struggles and he ends up getting her out from under the bed she tries running for the bathroom and gets stopped by the other man who ran into her with a knife she starts to cry just wishing her parents didnt leave her alone she says her last prayer and shes gone...her parents get home and find her dead they cry and hold a service the very next week...The End
gothgirl
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2009-03-22 20:07:59-05:00
her parents had always told her never to open the door when they werent home so sheyelled out..who is it!!!
there was no answer!
so she got scared and called a friend and spoke to them til her parents came back!
armybetty99
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2009-03-22 16:45:25-05:00
luckily she remembered that she should not answer the door. She didn't waste any time. She ran upstairs and hid in a place she kept as a secret place in the attic.It wasn't difficult for her to get up there since she has hidden there many times before.....The knock became louder and louder.In desperate silence, she wept.The front door broke opened and as it was her grandfather was told by her parents that she was alone.He only came by to help her and not be alone.He broke down the door because he thought she would be in trouble.He later found her hiding and crying. she ran into his arms and felt safe and secure. The End!
chinagirl818 added this comment 2009-09-19 21:10:48-05:00
oh Kool!! haha
itachi34533 added this comment 2009-03-27 21:19:30-05:00
And The Winner IS!!!!!!!! CHINAGIRL818 You all had awesome answers Thanks everybody
hife added this comment 2010-06-09 22:02:25-05:00
then heard a very faint knock on the door... she slowly approaches the door and hears the sliding glass door in the back open slowly and heard a bang so she ran for cover she had ran upstairs and hid under her bed it turns out that they were two guys and they start roaming around the house searching for her she covers her mouth restraining herself from screaming in terror. She tries not to move and sneezes she hears the guys running up the stairs right after sneezing she feels a hand on her leg and he pulls she struggles and he ends up getting her out from under the bed she tries running for the bathroom and gets stopped by the other man who ran into her with a knife she starts to cry just wishing her parents didnt leave her alone she says her last prayer and shes gone...her parents get home and find her dead they cry and hold a service the very next week...The End
gothgirl added this comment 2009-03-22 20:07:59-05:00
her parents had always told her never to open the door when they werent home so sheyelled out..who is it!!! there was no answer! so she got scared and called a friend and spoke to them til her parents came back!
armybetty99 added this comment 2009-03-22 16:45:25-05:00
luckily she remembered that she should not answer the door. She didn't waste any time. She ran upstairs and hid in a place she kept as a secret place in the attic.It wasn't difficult for her to get up there since she has hidden there many times before.....The knock became louder and louder.In desperate silence, she wept.The front door broke opened and as it was her grandfather was told by her parents that she was alone.He only came by to help her and not be alone.He broke down the door because he thought she would be in trouble.He later found her hiding and crying. she ran into his arms and felt safe and secure. The End!
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