touchywouchy
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2009-05-18 08:52:11-05:00
Hey James! Great work! You have a lot of attractive information about this series by Charlie Higson but I think you could fill in the blank spaces in the page. To improve I think you could have put the text in separate text boxes instead of putting all the text in a few boxes. Like what the others said, there are some errors. Otherwise it's great keep it up James!
-Justin
jammyjames
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2009-05-18 08:08:09-05:00
From the author of this glog: I have to agree the layout of my glog wasn't very good - but I have nearly no space in my glog! Can someone please point out the typos and errors for me?! I need to correct them.....
timsterchiu
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2009-05-18 06:38:08-05:00
Hey James,I think that your glog is visually interesting :) but I think that the layout of your glog could be improved. For example, the text was hard to read because you had cramped all your text into very small boxes. Also, there are too many gaps on the Glog. As I have said before, there are just a few typos, other than that...excellent :)
jammyjames
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2009-05-15 23:33:24-05:00
Umm...can you please point out the typos in it? I can't find them. Please tell me where!
hhliu
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2009-05-15 22:02:42-05:00
It's really good James. I think the design of the page could have been improved, because you have all of your writing in one tiny text box! There's too much empty spaces on the Glog. I haven't read any books in this series, but now that I've read your book review, I think I'll want to read it. As people have said before, there are just a few typos that you should look out for.
touchywouchy added this comment 2009-05-18 08:52:11-05:00
Hey James! Great work! You have a lot of attractive information about this series by Charlie Higson but I think you could fill in the blank spaces in the page. To improve I think you could have put the text in separate text boxes instead of putting all the text in a few boxes. Like what the others said, there are some errors. Otherwise it's great keep it up James! -Justin
jammyjames added this comment 2009-05-18 08:08:09-05:00
From the author of this glog: I have to agree the layout of my glog wasn't very good - but I have nearly no space in my glog! Can someone please point out the typos and errors for me?! I need to correct them.....
timsterchiu added this comment 2009-05-18 06:38:08-05:00
Hey James,I think that your glog is visually interesting :) but I think that the layout of your glog could be improved. For example, the text was hard to read because you had cramped all your text into very small boxes. Also, there are too many gaps on the Glog. As I have said before, there are just a few typos, other than that...excellent :)
jammyjames added this comment 2009-05-15 23:33:24-05:00
Umm...can you please point out the typos in it? I can't find them. Please tell me where!
hhliu added this comment 2009-05-15 22:02:42-05:00
It's really good James. I think the design of the page could have been improved, because you have all of your writing in one tiny text box! There's too much empty spaces on the Glog. I haven't read any books in this series, but now that I've read your book review, I think I'll want to read it. As people have said before, there are just a few typos that you should look out for.
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