jturnbull
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2009-06-02 22:30:41-05:00
need more writing by jonnyt
oliver366370
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2009-06-05 22:24:13-05:00
This is very good but you could make the title bigger and make it stand out more and there is lots of empty space to fill up and I think that you could write a short description for each book or a summary of all the books. Oliver
jturnbull added this comment 2009-06-02 22:30:41-05:00
need more writing by jonnyt
oliver366370 added this comment 2009-06-05 22:24:13-05:00
This is very good but you could make the title bigger and make it stand out more and there is lots of empty space to fill up and I think that you could write a short description for each book or a summary of all the books. Oliver