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Broken wings all around, all at once they start to flap, but i cannot hear a sound as the broken sun comes crashing down. The stars are dim and the sky is pale, the clouds are soot and the air is poison; but I breathe deep and I gaze above me, and all I see...is broken wings, all around me.
*copyright KryptoStar*
jenny96578 added this comment 2008-09-19 16:52:50-05:00
really a good peom. Like the part when you were talking about the stars in the sky and the sky in becoming dark.:D
gothgirl added this comment 2008-10-23 03:34:45-05:00
this is nice:)
rockon33 added this comment 2008-09-21 19:19:47-05:00
wow inetresting poem makes me smile :D
stuperb added this comment 2008-10-02 16:26:28-05:00
good stuff :)
voguegirl14 added this comment 2008-09-24 16:33:11-05:00
oo love itt xx
jenny96578 added this comment 2008-09-19 16:52:50-05:00
really a good peom. Like the part when you were talking about the stars in the sky and the sky in becoming dark.:D
gothgirl added this comment 2008-10-23 03:34:45-05:00
this is nice:)
rockon33 added this comment 2008-09-21 19:19:47-05:00
wow inetresting poem makes me smile :D
stuperb added this comment 2008-10-02 16:26:28-05:00
good stuff :)
voguegirl14 added this comment 2008-09-24 16:33:11-05:00
oo love itt xx