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but she kept her chin up and she loved him still because she knew what was inside a hole that she could fill his friends soon caught word of her feelings toward him they found it hysterical ubt her love did not dim she knew she was better then what they thought she was but still her heart was his for reasons she knew not of she slowly became more forlorn slipping deep into a hole he was still ignoring her breaking her delicate soul but her love did not falter she always thought of him but all the rumors about her put her closer to the brim on the final day his friends played a trick told her that he loved her just to watch her tick sadly she believed them and she was overjoyed little did she know that it was all a ploy she went up to him to make sure that he knew that she knew how he felt and that she loved him too he did not understand so all he did was stare telling her repeatedly that he really did not care she was finally over the edge she knew it could not be true i thought they said he loved her but deep inside she knew she could not comprehend how to go on living her life so she went into the kitchen and pulled out the sharpest knife she screamed into the air this is not how it should be she screamed all the things that she wished he would see she spoke of her love she cried of her pain she whispered of what happened how it could never be the same and with her last strength she scribbled her final note she explained everything and this is what she wrote: take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
she had always like him but never truly knew why he never talked to her his friends had made her cry she smiled at him in the hall he just turned his head he did not care about her is what he always said but she kept her chin up and she loved him still because she knew what was inside a hole that she could fill his friends soon caught word of her feelings toward him they found it hysterical ubt her love did not dim she knew she was better then what they thought she was but still her heart was his for reasons she knew not of she slowly became more forlorn slipping deep into a hole he was still ignoring her breaking her delicate soul but her love did not falter she always thought of him but all the rumors about her put her closer to the brim on the final day his friends played a trick told her that he loved her just to watch her tick sadly she believed them and she was overjoyed little did she know that it was all a ploy she went up to him to make sure that he knew that she knew how he felt and that she loved him too he did not understand so all he did was stare telling her repeatedly that he really did not care she was finally over the edge she knew it could not be true i thought they said he loved her but deep inside she knew she could not comprehend how to go on living her life so she went into the kitchen and pulled out the sharpest knife she screamed into the air this is not how it should be she screamed all the things that she wished he would see she spoke of her love she cried of her pain she whispered of what happened how it could never be the same and with her last strength she scribbled her final note she explained everything and this is what she wrote: take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
she could not comprehend how to go on living her life so she went into the kitchen and pulled out the sharpest knife she screamed into the air this is not how it should be she screamed all the things that she wished he would see she spoke of her love she cried of her pain she whispered of what happened how it could never be the same and with her last strength she scribbled her final note she explained everything and this is what she wrote: take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
he did not understand so all he did was stare telling her repeatedly that he really did not care she was finally over the edge she knew it could not be true i thought they said he loved her but deep inside she knew she could not comprehend how to go on living her life so she went into the kitchen and pulled out the sharpest knife she screamed into the air this is not how it should be she screamed all the things that she wished he would see she spoke of her love she cried of her pain she whispered of what happened how it could never be the same and with her last strength she scribbled her final note she explained everything and this is what she wrote: take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
sadly she believed them and she was overjoyed little did she know that it was all a ploy she went up to him to make sure that he knew that she knew how he felt and that she loved him too he did not understand so all he did was stare telling her repeatedly that he really did not care she was finally over the edge she knew it could not be true i thought they said he loved her but deep inside she knew she could not comprehend how to go on living her life so she went into the kitchen and pulled out the sharpest knife she screamed into the air this is not how it should be she screamed all the things that she wished he would see she spoke of her love she cried of her pain she whispered of what happened how it could never be the same and with her last strength she scribbled her final note she explained everything and this is what she wrote: take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
but her love did not falter she always thought of him but all the rumors about her put her closer to the brim on the final day his friends played a trick told her that he loved her just to watch her tick sadly she believed them and she was overjoyed little did she know that it was all a ploy she went up to him to make sure that he knew that she knew how he felt and that she loved him too he did not understand so all he did was stare telling her repeatedly that he really did not care she was finally over the edge she knew it could not be true i thought they said he loved her but deep inside she knew she could not comprehend how to go on living her life so she went into the kitchen and pulled out the sharpest knife she screamed into the air this is not how it should be she screamed all the things that she wished he would see she spoke of her love she cried of her pain she whispered of what happened how it could never be the same and with her last strength she scribbled her final note she explained everything and this is what she wrote: take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
she knew she was better then what they thought she was but still her heart was his for reasons she knew not of she slowly became more forlorn slipping deep into a hole he was still ignoring her breaking her delicate soul but her love did not falter she always thought of him but all the rumors about her put her closer to the brim on the final day his friends played a trick told her that he loved her just to watch her tick sadly she believed them and she was overjoyed little did she know that it was all a ploy she went up to him to make sure that he knew that she knew how he felt and that she loved him too he did not understand so all he did was stare telling her repeatedly that he really did not care she was finally over the edge she knew it could not be true i thought they said he loved her but deep inside she knew she could not comprehend how to go on living her life so she went into the kitchen and pulled out the sharpest knife she screamed into the air this is not how it should be she screamed all the things that she wished he would see she spoke of her love she cried of her pain she whispered of what happened how it could never be the same and with her last strength she scribbled her final note she explained everything and this is what she wrote: take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
she spoke of her love she cried of her pain she whispered of what happened how it could never be the same and with her last strength she scribbled her final note she explained everything and this is what she wrote: take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists watch the blood flow out it could've ended with a kiss take the bloody knife write words into my skin tell me that you hate me make the pain begin take the knife and hold it up so that everyone can see that this is the pain you were always causing me she watched the blood pour out collapsing on the floor little did she know that he was at the door he did not get an answer as he screamed her name he told her he was sorry what he said was really lame he did not want to give up he wanted her to know that he really did like her just did not let it show he did not care about his friends they were not his naymore so please, won't you please just open the damn door he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
she had always like him but never truly knew why he never talked to her his friends had made her cry she smiled at him in the hall he just turned his head he did not care about her is what he always said but she kept her chin up and she loved him still because she knew what was inside a hole that she could fill his friends soon caught word of her feelings toward him they found it hysterical ubt her love did not dim she knew she was better then what they thought she was but still her heart was his for reasons she knew not of she slowly became more forlorn slipping deep into a hole he was still ignoring her breaking her delicate soul but her love did not falter she always thought of him but all the rumors about her put her closer to the brim on the final day his friends played a trick told her that he loved her just to watch her tick sadly she believed them and she was overjoyed little did she know that it was all a ploy he walked to the window saw her lying there he pounded on the glass crying in despair he broke through the glass and knelt down on the floor looking at the girl he had always adored desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
desperately calling for help she was still alive he tried to bandage wounds please god let her survive he held her so close as the ambulance drew near i really do love you he whispered in her ear please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
I love you too
I really liked this poem and that's why i chose it. I liked it because it was really sweet. I thought it was neat that it rhymed. What it's about is really sweet and I think it took great effort to write a poem like this since it rhymes every 2nd and 4th verse.
- Anonymous poet
please don't give up i'll try to help you through we will make it work you know i love you too
