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Gentle pink cherry blossoms fluttered to the floor of the derelict garden. The pale stone grave markers were distorted by vines,so much so that only a few parts of a name could be made out. A small pond still had water lillies gliding over the surface hiding the graceful koi fish as they danced just below the waters surface causing only a small ripple. The aura of the golden rofftops on the the ruined building seemed almost visible in the beating sun. The paintings up the walls make the forbidden walls even more amzing. A Hanya mask hangs on a beam above a broken door, staring at you as if to inform that you are breaking rules entering here. A broken sword has left its regal hilt, a crimson grip entwined with a golden thread, the kanji on the guard reads 'Pride is like a blade.'
The vulgar remains of a broken chamber housed devises that the whole social order would find unnacceptable, for their look, their use and who used them.Ina small room from the disturbing chamber a desolate tea set, with a japanese dragon floating along the outside, was thrown about the room in a sickly manner. The stale crimson blood of a thousand warriors matted a loose tapedtry that documented a gruesome battle between man and beast. The tallest trees of the highest hills cast an elegant shadow on the beige tiles of the veranda floor. It was easy to tell that blood had not fallen in a long while as blood was still on the floor. Amongst the destruction and brutality there was still hope and kindness. This wa in the form of a shrine that seemed recently built with a picture of a striking warriors bust, but the name of all things had been scrubbed away, the wax from magenta candles still left thier mark on the beaten surface implying the candles have been brought here, then lit, then moved.
This is a peice of writing done for my GCSE's i would very much like to have feedback so i can make it better
narutoprincess101 added this comment 2009-02-24 17:07:36-06:00
The name Sakura means Cherry Blossom in japanese. cool glog
narutoprincess101 added this comment 2009-02-24 17:07:36-06:00
The name Sakura means Cherry Blossom in japanese. cool glog