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How do I write a better paragraph?
Did you start with a topic that is narrow enough to write just one paragraph with lots of details?
Revise your details !
Read your first draft: and:
_) Change to nifty nouns or descriptive words -- specific words like names
dog = poodle or Puffy
floor = hardwood paneled oak
_) Change dead verbs to active verbs (run to sprint; go to drive; look to glance).
_) Add imagery -- senses: sights, sounds, smells, tastes, touch,
_) Start sentences in different ways; make some long and some short.
So what's your place?
What does it look like and sound like? That's one paragraph.
What happened there? Write in detail about one thing.
Start with freewrite or brainstorm. .
Look over your prewriting. and start your first draft.
Fourth: Peer Edit