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a short story

pinklolly1

,United Kingdom
a short story

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breathetoday added this comment 2008-02-28 08:06:24-06:00

I think this is potentially a strong beginning...you should keep writing this its good. :)

rosered added this comment 2008-04-17 08:02:31-05:00

The text font or size could be bigger ;) Took me agaes to read it :D. But other than that the story is great

ladylia added this comment 2008-02-25 14:22:18-06:00

cool

youwish added this comment 2008-07-01 15:00:36-05:00

Maybe check your grammar first...always a good start :)

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