hanzla
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2008-08-10 13:29:34-05:00
i like your poem. i like the contrast between the miserable girl and the happy surroundings e.g. the 'happy couples', it gives the poem an ironic twist.
why not check out my glog poems and tell me in the comments if like them as much as i like yours?
harwoodgrrrrrrr
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2009-08-08 14:49:52-05:00
I really like it! I agree with Hanzla, the girl out on the street, with the joyful and happy surroundings...(: good!
hanzla added this comment 2008-08-10 13:29:34-05:00
i like your poem. i like the contrast between the miserable girl and the happy surroundings e.g. the 'happy couples', it gives the poem an ironic twist. why not check out my glog poems and tell me in the comments if like them as much as i like yours?
harwoodgrrrrrrr added this comment 2009-08-08 14:49:52-05:00
I really like it! I agree with Hanzla, the girl out on the street, with the joyful and happy surroundings...(: good!