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have you ever loved some body so much that it would make you cry?.. have you ever needed something so bad you couldnt sleep at night? have you ever tryed to find the words but they dont come out right? have you ever.? This is a little story about a girl who had her head up in the clouds..&& a boy that loved her.. but couldnt wait.. The girl new she was pretty,she new she could get any guy she wanted.the boy new he would never have a chance with her...but he never gave up,. Every night the girl would meet a new guy.Soemtimes she would get a call back.... some times not..The girl would cry herself to sleep every night.Hating her life.Hating being used.She wanted a true guy to love her.The boy knew what she was going threw.He could see right threw the smiles.But never had the curage too speak up& try to help.Time went by.And the smiles on the girls faces started too fade.Rumors were being spread.Freind ships were broken.Her past was starting to catch up on her..One day the boy finally got the curage to speak up..!He wanted to take her away from the life she was having.And show her what true love is like...He wanted to treat her the way she wanted to be treated.With kindness and respect.The boy made his way to her house.Re-tracing his steps. trying to avoid the embarrassment.He hated being turned down..He waited outside the gate of her house.then he saw an older man come out of the house.As the man walked past he ask the boy if he was next?The boy didnt undertsand,and slowly went up to the door.The door crept open. he saw little arrows leading to the lounge..and rested on the couch was a letter.. Dear mom. i finally made enuff money to help with the bills,,mum i thinking for awile now.I have ruined my life.i cant handle it any more all i give this familly is sorror.so its just better if i was gone.I know your most likley to be wasted to under stand what im saying. but mum i do love you and the familly..Its no,ones fault but mine for what im about to do..All i wanted was true love mom. but i guess its not for me .. byee love you x......................The boy quikly tried to find the girl. then he heard the garage door..He sprinted outside.and saw the girl sitting on the chair with a knife.He walked up to her and nealed down.she looked over to him and said'' all i wanted was true love.'' hugged her and kept her company.He stayed with her for the whole night.and for the first time in her life.she felt loved.then the boy suddenly couldnt breathe.the girl ask what was wrong?And forgotten he had forgot his inhaler..the girl didnt know what to do.she didnt leave him.Not for a split second.The boy didnt want to leave her either.He finally got the girl of his dreams.finally the girl got up to get some help.but the boy wouldnt let her leave.He wanted to stay in her arms. she sat next to him kissed him on the cheek.''you showed me what true love is.. and i dont want you too leave with out me''He looked up at her. with tears down his face.Then his eyes shut. and didnt oopen.Then the girl got up and looked aorund the garage. behind the table something cought her eye it was moms gun.. she placed herself down by the boy and kissed him good by and shot her self in the temple. last words to the boy was you showed me the love i never had
jaredkat added this comment 2011-07-06 04:14:37-05:00
*crys a little* makes me cry
jaredkat added this comment 2011-07-06 03:56:02-05:00
Really sad... but this is the stuff i think... amazing writing... too bad i cant write like this awesome job...
annaavalanche added this comment 2008-10-25 20:17:45-05:00
Thats really really sad. But amazing story. Good glog.
jaredkat added this comment 2011-07-06 04:14:37-05:00
*crys a little* makes me cry
jaredkat added this comment 2011-07-06 03:56:02-05:00
Really sad... but this is the stuff i think... amazing writing... too bad i cant write like this awesome job...
annaavalanche added this comment 2008-10-25 20:17:45-05:00
Thats really really sad. But amazing story. Good glog.