touchywouchy
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2009-05-18 09:17:14-05:00
Dear Ron,
This was actually pretty good except that you could have improved a few things. There were some errors in your writing, there were some spelling mistakes too like the box about the "Book Review" you had spelled arrest wrong you spelled it as arest. Otherwise I think the layout was really good all the colors and how you arranged it. Instead of typing the link into the text box you might able to refer us to the actual website. There were a lot of space on the page maybe you got use more the space maybe putting a trailer of the movie onto it.
jammyjames
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2009-05-18 08:49:48-05:00
Dear Ron the Monster,
I thought your glog was quite good, and I liked the layout alot. It was written up very well, but had quite a few grammatical errors, with some spelling mistakes. You could have used up more of the space, maybe even add the trailer of the movie "The Da Vinci Code". Overall, I thought your amount of text let you down a little, but I really liked your layout of the glog, along with the writing.
"The Da Vinci Code" is one of the best novels I've read!!!
miyukochang
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2009-05-29 05:58:12-05:00
cool 5 stars
:D
ronstamonsta
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2009-05-21 20:43:14-05:00
I tryed to use the da Vinci code theme.
daichi08
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2009-05-21 08:04:18-05:00
Ron
I really like your page
It didnt look that eye catching but it was still ok
I liked how you put different covers of the boook
touchywouchy added this comment 2009-05-18 09:17:14-05:00
Dear Ron, This was actually pretty good except that you could have improved a few things. There were some errors in your writing, there were some spelling mistakes too like the box about the "Book Review" you had spelled arrest wrong you spelled it as arest. Otherwise I think the layout was really good all the colors and how you arranged it. Instead of typing the link into the text box you might able to refer us to the actual website. There were a lot of space on the page maybe you got use more the space maybe putting a trailer of the movie onto it.
jammyjames added this comment 2009-05-18 08:49:48-05:00
Dear Ron the Monster, I thought your glog was quite good, and I liked the layout alot. It was written up very well, but had quite a few grammatical errors, with some spelling mistakes. You could have used up more of the space, maybe even add the trailer of the movie "The Da Vinci Code". Overall, I thought your amount of text let you down a little, but I really liked your layout of the glog, along with the writing. "The Da Vinci Code" is one of the best novels I've read!!!
miyukochang added this comment 2009-05-29 05:58:12-05:00
cool 5 stars :D
ronstamonsta added this comment 2009-05-21 20:43:14-05:00
I tryed to use the da Vinci code theme.
daichi08 added this comment 2009-05-21 08:04:18-05:00
Ron I really like your page It didnt look that eye catching but it was still ok I liked how you put different covers of the boook
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