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Blood, blood everywhere. Everything I never wanted to see. Her body just lying there, Not a shake, Not a breath. That little silver object Just lying on the floor, Which caused the blood to spill. Innocent blood everywhere. She knew what she was doing. Her note is typed for me. I never thought she would do this, I thought she was happy. She didn't deserve to die. No matter what that note says, I must have dont something To drive her to this. This horrendous deed To take her own life. Why wasn't it me? I'd do anything to bring her back. I'd take back everything I said. I love you, I love you. But it is useless Crys to unhearing ears. I just want to die.
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silversageofthemoon added this comment 2008-06-12 22:10:41-05:00
This is realllllllllly good. You should be one of those kids ina coffee shop reading these types of poems.
roseofdarkness01 added this comment 2008-06-09 21:01:14-05:00
after this is A Mother's Farewell. Please tell me what you think about them
roseofdarkness01 added this comment 2008-06-08 00:23:21-05:00
This is actually the second poem to my other poem Final Goodbye. it makes more sense if u read that one first
silversageofthemoon added this comment 2008-06-12 22:10:41-05:00
This is realllllllllly good. You should be one of those kids ina coffee shop reading these types of poems.
roseofdarkness01 added this comment 2008-06-09 21:01:14-05:00
after this is A Mother's Farewell. Please tell me what you think about them
roseofdarkness01 added this comment 2008-06-08 00:23:21-05:00
This is actually the second poem to my other poem Final Goodbye. it makes more sense if u read that one first