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Up and down I can not win This tug of war Beneath my skin My mind clouds up I'm slipping down Under the surface Let me drown I want to let go Please release me I can float away Into the sea Over my head The water is still Crystaline blue My lungs start to fill Stop. My chest heaves Clenching pain What's going on This isn't a game! My lungs suffocate Something unknown Claws and my throat Grinds through my bones Rise and fall These emotions go Heated sun rays Then icy winds blow I can not control My life or my mind Can't put together What's left behind Broken pieces Cracked into shreds Leave me lifeless A walking dead One minute happy The next in despair No one knows Just how I got there Life living on A balancing beam But you don't know Things aren't what they seem. Copyright 2008 skeptik
The water is still Crystaline blue My lungs start to fill Stop. My chest heaves Clenching pain What's going on This isn't a game! My lungs suffocate Something unknown Claws and my throat Grinds through my bones
Rise and fall These emotions go Heated sun rays Then icy winds blow I can not control My life or my mind Can't put together What's left behind Broken pieces Cracked into shreds Leave me lifeless A walking dead
One minute happy The next in despair No one knows Just how I got there Life living on A balancing beam But you don't know Things aren't what they seem. Copyright 2008 skeptik
rawritsthekid added this comment 2008-11-29 19:16:44-06:00
Love it.
cutsietootsiepie added this comment 2008-11-14 08:56:49-06:00
wooo shiverss!!
nikki007 added this comment 2008-11-14 00:02:02-06:00
omg this rocks
spazzyjazzi added this comment 2008-11-13 22:17:02-06:00
very very nice. ^^ this poem is amazing and very true
mickeymouse16 added this comment 2008-11-13 22:07:38-06:00
Awww i see i didnt see the poem... i like it ...maybe it didnt load but i love the poem... very nice job... XD
rawritsthekid added this comment 2008-11-29 19:16:44-06:00
Love it.
cutsietootsiepie added this comment 2008-11-14 08:56:49-06:00
wooo shiverss!!
nikki007 added this comment 2008-11-14 00:02:02-06:00
omg this rocks
spazzyjazzi added this comment 2008-11-13 22:17:02-06:00
very very nice. ^^ this poem is amazing and very true
mickeymouse16 added this comment 2008-11-13 22:07:38-06:00
Awww i see i didnt see the poem... i like it ...maybe it didnt load but i love the poem... very nice job... XD
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