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I wander aimlessly Empty Through the halls. Every thing is so similar So different. I feel like a ghost In a life That isn't Mine. Going through the motions Of being something Not fully there. My mind races A mile a minute But the words I say
Express little Of my thoughts. What happened? Another peice of me Was shattered yesterday. I swore, I wouldn't Get hurt. I really, truely Thought I wouldn't. So why Am I still hurting? Why does it feel Like I have lost Everything When I gave
Nothing. Or so I thought. Or so I said. And now I sit here Empty. Contemplating. Confused. Where do I go from here? Because you can only Run so fast Before you hit An edge. And it all will crash upon you. Your only choice Is to face it
Or be pushed off that Edge. What now?
Copyright 2008 skeptik
hannibean added this comment 2008-09-06 02:54:21-05:00
Absolutely brilliant. Rated 5...
flick added this comment 2008-09-11 00:10:53-05:00
I usually don't like free verse, but this was cool. good job.
zaraiya added this comment 2008-09-05 18:27:17-05:00
wow. i'm not a huge fan of unrhymed free verse, but this is amazing. great picture too, by the way.
eloise18 added this comment 2008-09-05 16:30:27-05:00
amazing AS USUAL!!! it's beautiful, or at least seems like that to me
gothgirl added this comment 2008-09-05 01:43:01-05:00
wow this is brilliant:)
hannibean added this comment 2008-09-06 02:54:21-05:00
Absolutely brilliant. Rated 5...
flick added this comment 2008-09-11 00:10:53-05:00
I usually don't like free verse, but this was cool. good job.
zaraiya added this comment 2008-09-05 18:27:17-05:00
wow. i'm not a huge fan of unrhymed free verse, but this is amazing. great picture too, by the way.
eloise18 added this comment 2008-09-05 16:30:27-05:00
amazing AS USUAL!!! it's beautiful, or at least seems like that to me
gothgirl added this comment 2008-09-05 01:43:01-05:00
wow this is brilliant:)
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