willpalmer
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2009-05-18 11:35:04-05:00
Well done Timmy. You Have made this page very interesting and have added music that matches the story line of the books!You have added some good photos and links for more information. You had already added good information on the glogster and it looks really great.
touchywouchy
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2009-05-18 08:42:40-05:00
Nice Timmy, I think you have put a lot of effort into this. You chose your pictures carefully and you have described about the author and books very interestingly. I also this is a very animated book review with very creative ideas. There were links referred to the book which was really good. The music scared me at first but its really good but when it starts singing I don't think it suits the book review you're doing. You also might have been able to add a video of interviews with the author.
-Justin
jammyjames
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2009-05-18 08:29:23-05:00
Timster,
I dont know if other ppl noticed, but there is some kind of glitch on your photo of "Point Blanc"...it shows a picture of Anthony Horowitz instead! But I know its meant to be Point Blanc because the link goes to a wikipedia page about it, and when everything is loading (on ur glog) I can see a blurred picture of Point Blanc! Go check it urself...strange.
jammyjames
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2009-05-18 08:26:46-05:00
Dear Timmy,
I thought your glog was really good, it was very well written and the layout was quite good. I liked the music you used, although it was a little irrelevant. I noticed you put a frame around "Snakehead", as it is the latest, but you could have put it around "Ark Angel", as it is the book you are reviewing. I also saw quite a few careless grammatical errors, e.g. some sentences needed commas in certain places, some sentences didn't make sense, you confused some words with similar ones...like: "the 14 year old M16 agent beat down EVERYONE of them." it should be every one of them...The most agonizing mistakes were the spelling errors! I thought the links you put on the pictures were very useful. I also thought everything was very bright and colourful, making it easier to see. Overall, an very good piece of work - this glog makes me want to read the whole series again and again!
ashley888
added this comment
2009-05-18 06:37:36-05:00
Hey Timmy, waw thats alot of description. I think you have spent alot of effort into this glog, and added lots of eye catching pictures. However, I think the background really suits the book you are describing. + your music really shocked me when it started. -.-
willpalmer added this comment 2009-05-18 11:35:04-05:00
Well done Timmy. You Have made this page very interesting and have added music that matches the story line of the books!You have added some good photos and links for more information. You had already added good information on the glogster and it looks really great.
touchywouchy added this comment 2009-05-18 08:42:40-05:00
Nice Timmy, I think you have put a lot of effort into this. You chose your pictures carefully and you have described about the author and books very interestingly. I also this is a very animated book review with very creative ideas. There were links referred to the book which was really good. The music scared me at first but its really good but when it starts singing I don't think it suits the book review you're doing. You also might have been able to add a video of interviews with the author. -Justin
jammyjames added this comment 2009-05-18 08:29:23-05:00
Timster, I dont know if other ppl noticed, but there is some kind of glitch on your photo of "Point Blanc"...it shows a picture of Anthony Horowitz instead! But I know its meant to be Point Blanc because the link goes to a wikipedia page about it, and when everything is loading (on ur glog) I can see a blurred picture of Point Blanc! Go check it urself...strange.
jammyjames added this comment 2009-05-18 08:26:46-05:00
Dear Timmy, I thought your glog was really good, it was very well written and the layout was quite good. I liked the music you used, although it was a little irrelevant. I noticed you put a frame around "Snakehead", as it is the latest, but you could have put it around "Ark Angel", as it is the book you are reviewing. I also saw quite a few careless grammatical errors, e.g. some sentences needed commas in certain places, some sentences didn't make sense, you confused some words with similar ones...like: "the 14 year old M16 agent beat down EVERYONE of them." it should be every one of them...The most agonizing mistakes were the spelling errors! I thought the links you put on the pictures were very useful. I also thought everything was very bright and colourful, making it easier to see. Overall, an very good piece of work - this glog makes me want to read the whole series again and again!
ashley888 added this comment 2009-05-18 06:37:36-05:00
Hey Timmy, waw thats alot of description. I think you have spent alot of effort into this glog, and added lots of eye catching pictures. However, I think the background really suits the book you are describing. + your music really shocked me when it started. -.-
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