jacky8w
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2009-05-18 22:19:03-05:00
i like this glog it looks good and i sort of agree with haihao it not really like a book review and the bottom looks pretty confusing
willpalmer
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2009-05-18 10:21:12-05:00
Justin,
This glog is interesting and has a good video and is very well done. Explain more about the book and what you think of it.
willpalmer
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2009-05-18 10:20:42-05:00
Justin,
This glog is interesting and has a good video and is very well done. Explain more about the book.
jammyjames
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2009-05-18 07:27:36-05:00
Dear Justin,
Like your peers said, I thought you didn't write enough about your own opinion, but I could imagine it would be harder to write about the plots of 10 stories! Other than that, I only spotted one or two spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I thought the glog itself was very eye-catching and colourful, with a interesting introduction to the book - in the green and white textboxes. Overall, very good effort with some great work - I probably want to read this myself!
timsterchiu
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2009-05-18 06:46:54-05:00
Hey Justin, This glog is very visually interesting :) I think that the picture of the book cover (nightmare hour) really captures people's attention. I think that you were too brief with your book review. You did not really explain the plot and introduce the characters. I think you should add on to your description. I also think that you should proof read it, there are some spelling errors and grammatical errors. For example, The most evil socerer? Sorcerer :D good job though
jacky8w added this comment 2009-05-18 22:19:03-05:00
i like this glog it looks good and i sort of agree with haihao it not really like a book review and the bottom looks pretty confusing
willpalmer added this comment 2009-05-18 10:21:12-05:00
Justin, This glog is interesting and has a good video and is very well done. Explain more about the book and what you think of it.
willpalmer added this comment 2009-05-18 10:20:42-05:00
Justin, This glog is interesting and has a good video and is very well done. Explain more about the book.
jammyjames added this comment 2009-05-18 07:27:36-05:00
Dear Justin, Like your peers said, I thought you didn't write enough about your own opinion, but I could imagine it would be harder to write about the plots of 10 stories! Other than that, I only spotted one or two spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I thought the glog itself was very eye-catching and colourful, with a interesting introduction to the book - in the green and white textboxes. Overall, very good effort with some great work - I probably want to read this myself!
timsterchiu added this comment 2009-05-18 06:46:54-05:00
Hey Justin, This glog is very visually interesting :) I think that the picture of the book cover (nightmare hour) really captures people's attention. I think that you were too brief with your book review. You did not really explain the plot and introduce the characters. I think you should add on to your description. I also think that you should proof read it, there are some spelling errors and grammatical errors. For example, The most evil socerer? Sorcerer :D good job though
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