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Present Day
Richard had trouble even thinking for the next couple of days. It was amost as if he was in an unbreakable trance, always staring off into space as if he is only physically there. In truth, he was only phyiscally there, and while he sat in the classrooms or in his own home, all he could think of is the last words he actually got to tell her: "Yeah see you later," kept running through his mind. He wanted to say so much more. He had never thought about being without her, until she left. It was like raindrops decending to the ground, but disapearing before they made it. It was a tease, a cruel joke, or someone telling you not to take the cookie and then letting someone else take it. He began to wonder if she was even real, or just something that his mind had made to keep him occupied with his time. "Well, just move on and get it over with," he told himself. He began to draw. He wasn't quite sure how it would turn out, or even what it was. He started with a simple diamond shape, a rhombus, and inside the rhombus, he drew an oval, and inside that, a perfect cirlce. It began to look like something he could remember, something unforgettable. He added transversal lines through the rhombus connecting to the oval and added color and detail to the circle. He began to see an eye, but oddly enough, it seemed to be one of Persephone's eyes. He sat there wondering how he could have done it. She does have some of the most beautiful eyes, but to him, they were inreplicatable. You could almost say it was a picture taken from a camera. When he went home he went straight to bed and went to sleep. Not to be heard from for many hours. He had shut himself away from the world, from everything. HE began to linger on his drawing and how amazingly it resembled her eyes. On one side, he was proud that he drew it so well. On the other, however, he wondered why her eyes, and not someone else's.
Souds good to me, Btw, Whatcha think of the title?
xoxsaraxox added this comment 2010-09-27 00:42:25-05:00
Hey its an awesome story...ur a gud writer :) Want to see more of ur work... ^^
kinainu added this comment 2010-10-16 13:20:16-05:00
i luvz it!!!
xoxsaraxox added this comment 2010-09-27 00:42:25-05:00
Hey its an awesome story...ur a gud writer :) Want to see more of ur work... ^^
kinainu added this comment 2010-10-16 13:20:16-05:00
i luvz it!!!