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[Prove to me that this is real Show me something beautiful Show me you’re light] Now tell me is it that smile? Dragging me into the denial, The denial of the fiction of us Until I get what I deserve Open your mind and tell me if you really want me [Your mouth can’t stand your lies You should set your alibis] Will you follow me into the sea green ocean? Crashing on us with it’s every motion --------------------------------------- [Will you stand here with me? Stand tall So in the end of the story We live happily ever after] ----------------------------------------- Are you the good scene? In the bad dream This is a first for me Will you let it conceal me? [Swallow me alive] Will you follow me into the sea green ocean? Crashing on us with it’s every motion I’ve waited far too long for where I stand [Take my hand] My heart beats so soft, Your eyes are so divine Brighter then the stars they shine Etched in my heart Sits your name
Alright, So I'm writing some new songs for my band, I need your opinion on them, out of 5, 1 being terrible, 5 being fantastic. The way I have it set up, is the writing between the [brackets] is the screamo parts. And the parts between the ----lines---- Is the break down. K ? Tell me what you think in comments pleaseeeee !!! <3
Breathing Underwater Is A Lot Harder Then A Fish Makes It Look
Survival Of The Weakest, Death To The Warriors
Is the prince still there? The creatures might stare But we won’t care Combine your soul with mine [The ocean can’t be sucked up by a sponge] The whispers turned to screams The battle’s started, choose your teams Will you stay? [Close your eyes, Lets dream] [Cut them all down] It’s the terror we find, The evil that creeps outside It’s what gives our compassion the strength [Survival of the weakest] Don’t speak a word They’ll twist it against us And gush it out like a crystal waterfall [Don’t believe a word of it] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - We’ll enter the battle field Blood on the shield In the horror But we’ll have each other [Hold me close] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The struck desire The war that’s inflicted the fear They’re all hung by a single wire [Cut them all down] It’s the terror we find, The evil that creeps outside It’s what gives our compassion the strength [Survival of the weakest] Hold me close, Don’t let go, Hole me close, Don’t let go
grapegirl101 added this comment 2011-10-06 22:05:39-05:00
555 i was singing it in my head and it sounded great i loved the way it went and good luck
emoluver17 added this comment 2009-07-27 21:45:11-05:00
555555555555!!!!!!!!!!
nikkitokio added this comment 2009-07-27 20:59:47-05:00
great job!=D
katzii added this comment 2010-01-08 12:18:22-06:00
5! this is great! gd luck with the band(:
moomooquacker added this comment 2009-07-21 00:30:11-05:00
555555!
grapegirl101 added this comment 2011-10-06 22:05:39-05:00
555 i was singing it in my head and it sounded great i loved the way it went and good luck
emoluver17 added this comment 2009-07-27 21:45:11-05:00
555555555555!!!!!!!!!!
nikkitokio added this comment 2009-07-27 20:59:47-05:00
great job!=D
katzii added this comment 2010-01-08 12:18:22-06:00
5! this is great! gd luck with the band(:
moomooquacker added this comment 2009-07-21 00:30:11-05:00
555555!
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