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Last Breathes
It is my few last breathes as I fall to the floor, the blood wont stop coming so i just watch it pour, the voices in my head say i did good. . .
. . .and now I can be sure, that everyone will be full of bliss since i am there no more, the blade cut deep the poison seeps, and with my last breaths i manage to gasp ''i wish not to live','' and to me my wish was granted.
I hope you like my poem, its one of my very first, but dont comment if your going to be rude, ive had enough of people being rude to me. THANK YOU! ! ! ! ! ! !
xbrokenheartedx added this comment 2009-02-09 21:58:23-06:00
thnx lexi!!!
skulltomboy added this comment 2009-02-09 20:40:34-06:00
AWESOME!!!!!! i luv all ur glogs!
rachelratbag added this comment 2009-02-13 14:09:46-06:00
That is soooo greatttttttttttttt!!!!!
paintitallblack added this comment 2009-02-13 11:52:39-06:00
I..love...it im rating 5
emoclo added this comment 2009-02-13 11:38:40-06:00
cool like it am rateing it 5* ^^
xbrokenheartedx added this comment 2009-02-09 21:58:23-06:00
thnx lexi!!!
skulltomboy added this comment 2009-02-09 20:40:34-06:00
AWESOME!!!!!! i luv all ur glogs!
rachelratbag added this comment 2009-02-13 14:09:46-06:00
That is soooo greatttttttttttttt!!!!!
paintitallblack added this comment 2009-02-13 11:52:39-06:00
I..love...it im rating 5
emoclo added this comment 2009-02-13 11:38:40-06:00
cool like it am rateing it 5* ^^
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