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I feel like I'm a sinking ship My sails have sunken in My hull is broken up The crew has abandoned me The water consumes me, thrashing in rage It crashes it's fury against my wooden skin As I shatter bit to bit, The captain bids me farewell and joins his kin
My body decends down The crew looks my way Their looks of fake pity Fill me with rage A wave suges over their boat And they all tumble out Their screams are heard through out I think " It serves them right" Each second I plummet Down to the oceans floor The sandy shore will soon become A welcoming death bed
I'm torn into ruins My body is reduced shreds My mind is filled self-pity As I finally rest head I'm a sinking ship Through and through Don't abandon me Or this will happen to you.
vivien added this comment 2009-02-14 18:06:55-06:00
great glog.
pandalover added this comment 2009-02-14 18:01:36-06:00
i like the pic and words great job!!
gothgirl added this comment 2009-01-29 18:18:41-06:00
omg this is amazing writing:)
bookworm123 added this comment 2009-01-25 02:14:30-06:00
O.O whoa........
loversyou added this comment 2009-01-25 01:40:21-06:00
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vivien added this comment 2009-02-14 18:06:55-06:00
great glog.
pandalover added this comment 2009-02-14 18:01:36-06:00
i like the pic and words great job!!
gothgirl added this comment 2009-01-29 18:18:41-06:00
omg this is amazing writing:)
bookworm123 added this comment 2009-01-25 02:14:30-06:00
O.O whoa........
loversyou added this comment 2009-01-25 01:40:21-06:00
OMG i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love love love this!!
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