dannimarie
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2009-12-24 21:01:57-06:00
i liked it it reminded me of mr.whiting
xxpeacexx
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2009-07-27 13:11:11-05:00
okay thank you.
horse14rider
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2009-07-27 11:10:56-05:00
nice start. try some end rhymes, and word choice is a huge part.
kkinformation
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2009-12-28 06:24:01-06:00
i like it too...its a good start but i don't know anything about poems lol
yeah it reminds me of mr. whithing too...did u know its been two years
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dannimarie added this comment 2009-12-24 21:01:57-06:00
i liked it it reminded me of mr.whiting
xxpeacexx added this comment 2009-07-27 13:11:11-05:00
okay thank you.
horse14rider added this comment 2009-07-27 11:10:56-05:00
nice start. try some end rhymes, and word choice is a huge part.
kkinformation added this comment 2009-12-28 06:24:01-06:00
i like it too...its a good start but i don't know anything about poems lol yeah it reminds me of mr. whithing too...did u know its been two years love u!