Lucifers Son! ch 1

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Hi everyone! ok so im wrighting a book called Lucifers Son., about how the devils son is tired of his father and gos to the human world were he meets a young artist, Ivy, and has new expericances, wll HERE is da first chapter! tell me...wat i need to fix!

CH.1 The guards demand “Leopold, The Master wishes to see you.” The guard barked . “Of course,” I mocked sarcastically, “My Great-And-Powerful father wishes to conference with me? What have I done now? ” “You should be grateful of what he has given you, Leopold. Be happy that he holds such might and power! I don’t know how he can put up with your rebellion and remarks. I believe it is only because you are his son, and that he wants you to help him build up his awesome legacy even more. We should all be grateful for what he has done for us.” The guard said this with great pride, nodding to himself and looking of into the distance, as if he were reciting an oath. He was obviously new to the profession. He did not know what things my “Father” had done, and could do. He probably still saw Him as The Awesome Master, who could do no wrong. He would see His true being soon. And Then be molded to be like the rest of the guards, he would share the same ideas as Satan, but still think he was somehow his own person. I felt bad for him, as a matter of fact. I did not know what I should be grateful for. Father has used the age old Censoring trick. I , according to him, was not allowed to read anything but biblical, satanic, and VERY abridged history books, not hear any music except those horrible demonic chants, no exposure to colors what-so-EVER except black, gray and red, ( I have NO idea what a purple is,) and I was not to venture to the humans world at all, which was the VERY species we were trying to capture! All of this is supposed to keep my mind in a little box. But still, my personality found contradicting ideas to that of the all mighty Fallen Angel. My Father and I are not all that close, as you may have already guessed. “Leo, dow’nt go…” The little one said, tugging on my hand. I did not know how, but He had found a way to bring children as small as Margret to his awful kingdom, now. She had passed from cancer--what her supposed sin was, I did not know. Utterly ridiculous. “Come on, Maggie,” Miss. Kyle coaxed, (her sin was ignorance, and a few other minor things. Do you share my point of view in this stupidity?) taking her hand, “Leopold will play with you later.” “Ok… bwye-bwye, Leo !” “Goodbye, Margret. Have a good day.” I called back as she ran away. T he guard scoffed, most likely disgusted with the fact that I become friends with almost all the souls in the kingdom. And the ones that still were tainted, I try to help repent and become good natured. Of course He did not know about any of this. All of the “occupants” ,and my elfin friends kept this little secret of mine. “So, dear-old-dad is angry at you again, eh?” Bill questioned. He and Charles had been playing checkers, as they did every day. Both 80 years of age( looking-wise of course. They had been there for at least a few thousand years. Before I was born indefinitely.), smart mouthed, polish, strong minded men. “I suppose he is.“ I muttered. “Be careful with your wording though, Son, we don’t want another little ‘scratch’ on the right side of yer kisser to match the left one…” Charles cautioned. The two old men had practically become segregate fathers to me. They had been there when I forced my opinion just a bit too strongly for fathers patience. When he lost his temper and decided to give me a punishment… , “Now you will always smile when you look at me…” I shuddered to myself at remembering the remark. “If that bastard tries it again, I’ll give him something to smile about!” Bill snarled. “Yes, but he would probably turn you to ashes before you got the chance!” Charles teased mockingly. “Why would I care? I’m already dead!” “Prince Leopold!” the guard called, already at the top of the hill looking into the village, “Make haste for diers sake, you incompetent buffoon !” with that lovely outburst, I bid goodbye to Bill and Charles, and trotted up the hill after him. I was not at all exited to speak with my father, the ghoul known as Satan.

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yinyangwolf added this comment 2009-07-15 20:09:31-05:00

XD awww thank yous!

yinyangwolf added this comment 2009-08-06 16:13:01-05:00

well the guard was lecturing him and so all the others think that hell is great and Leopold is in training to aid his father so tht y i came up with tht.

yinyangwolf added this comment 2009-07-11 23:32:42-05:00

ALER ALERT ALERT! PLZZZZ

yinyangwolf added this comment 2009-07-11 23:32:30-05:00

OMG THNX GUYS!!!!

sweeterthanlife34 added this comment 2009-07-14 19:19:13-05:00

:O it is ........AMAZING!!!! keep up the good i mean great wrk! :>

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